Hot damn, she's gorgeous! I love dark blue as a color scheme for her cloak and I guess her leather armor, it fits so well for a roguish type of look. Speaking of her ambiguously armored attire, I like that it looks practical. Yeah, there's enough space to show cleavage and her upper arms aren't covered, but it's very modest compared to standard female armor you see in dirt-average MMO's, so I don't mind the little fanservice there. It's enough to provide some eye candy without being outright shameless. I also like that you gave some detail on the clasp of her cloak. Oh, did I mention that's she's gorgeous? Because she is. I have a thing for wavy hair; to me it's a symbol that the character is supposed to be seen as beautiful and not simply pretty, and the presence of a braid makes it all the more apparent. I also like the combination of red hair with blue eyes. There's something about that combination that just goes well, whereas the more popular red hair with green eyes tend to be hit or miss at times. Her plump, glossy lips, her fuller eyebrows and how the outer tip of her eyes point a little upward is just icing on this already sublime cake.